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Spider Legacy – Chapter 2: City Under Web
Three Months After the Bite
7:15 AM – Midoriya Household
Izuku stands outside his brother's bedroom door and knocks gently.
Izuku:
"Andrew, it's time to get up! We have classes today."
Inside the room, Andrew groans quietly. We see light shadows under his eyes from sleepless nights. He pulls on his school uniform—concealing a red-and-blue spider costume beneath it.
He opens the door.
Andrew:
"Alright, brother. Let's go."
On the Way to School
Andrew and Izuku walk side by side, chatting casually. As they pass a store window, a news report plays on a TV inside.
News Reporter:
"For the past three months, a mysterious vigilante calling himself Spider-Man has brought down crime rates by nearly 13% in our city.
Now the question is—what are the heroes going to do about it?"
Reporter 2:
"With us now is the current No. 2 Hero—Endeavor. Sir, what are your thoughts on Spider-Man?"
Endeavor (frowning):
"This 'Spider-Man' is nothing more than a coward and a showboating vigilante. To all of Japan: I will be the one to catch him."
Reporter:
"There you have it, folks. Stay tuned for more updates."
Izuku:
"Looks like the pros are finally going to start hunting down this 'Spider-Man'. He's gonna have to be more careful now, huh?"
Andrew (calmly):
"Maybe. But I doubt that'll stop him from doing what's right."
The school bell rings, and the brothers dash inside, heading to class.
In Class – Mid-Morning
Andrew slouches at his desk, resting his chin on his hand as class begins.
Andrew (thinking):
"Things are definitely getting harder. If I keep acting as Spider-Man, they'll come after me soon."
"Still… I'm not stopping. Not now."
"But my current suit is too dark for daytime use. I should design a new one—maybe something like the Amazing Spider-Man 2 version? Yeah… I'll think about it later."
Suddenly, a loud siren blares through the school. The evacuation alarm goes off.
Andrew sits up quickly and turns to Izuku.
Andrew:
"What's going on?! I wasn't paying attention."
Izuku:
"A villain's been spotted close to Aldera. They're letting us go early since it's near the end of the day anyway."
Andrew:
"Got it. Hey—I've got something I need to handle first. I'll meet you at home."
He hugs Izuku quickly and runs off.
Scene: Back Alley – Transformation
Andrew sprints down a side street, ducking into his usual alley. He quickly changes out of his school uniform and into his dark red and blue Spider-Man suit, marked with a bold white spider across the chest.
With a flip, he leaps up the wall and starts sprinting across rooftops, his thoughts racing.
Andrew (thinking):
"Those sirens… something big is happening. And wherever it is, I need to be there."
He webs forward, following the sound of chaos.
Downtown – Villain Encounter
Spider-Man arrives on the scene. A massive, rhino-like villain is rampaging through traffic, scattering cars and civilians.
Spider-Man (landing on a rooftop):
"Hey, ugly! If you're looking for the zoo, it's about six blocks that way!"
Rhino (snorting):
"And what's a bug like you gonna do about it?!"
The Rhino charges forward—straight toward a pro hero, Water Hose, who is pinned down.
Spider-Man reacts instantly, webbing Water Hose to safety, pulling her away just as Rhino's horn impales a car.
Spider-Man (thinking fast):
"Web the legs… anchor him—now!"
Multiple webs shoot out, wrapping Rhino's limbs and stopping his momentum just as he stumbles.
Spider-Man (leaping forward):
"Time to put you down!"
He swings in, delivering a powerful punch to the side of Rhino's head. The villain drops like a boulder.
Police and heroes arrive shortly after. But by then, Spider-Man is already gone—swinging off into the distance, disappearing into the rooftops.
Later That Evening – Midoriya House
Andrew quietly walks into his room, his mind still spinning.
Andrew (thinking):
"I knew some heroes wouldn't act. That's why I have to."
"But if I'm gonna keep doing this… I need a better suit. I need to be faster, safer, stronger."
He opens his notebook and flips to a new page, starting to sketch a new costume design.
End of Chapter
🕸️ Author's Notes:
Andrew's first suit is inspired by the Amazing Spider-Man 1 movie.
He's planning to upgrade it soon—possibly to a design like Amazing Spider-Man 2, optimized for daytime patrols.
He's balancing school, hiding his identity, and trying to make a real difference as Spider-Man—all while not stepping on Izuku's journey.