Author's Note – Feedback Request
Hey readers!
Thank you for reading Chapter 1 of my story.
This is just the beginning of Jay's journey—from death to rebirth—and I want to make it as engaging and meaningful as possible.
→Your feedback matters!
If you have a moment, please share your thoughts on:
What did you think of Jay's execution and transition scene?
Was the reincarnation scene clear and emotionally effective?
Does the idea of Limbo and rebirth intrigue you?
Is the pacing too fast, too slow, or just right?
Any grammar, dialogue, or clarity issues you noticed?
Even a single sentence helps me improve.
Drop a comment, review, or even a simple like if you're enjoying the vibe so far.
Thanks for being part of Jay's story.
—Gray_swing_6